So a friend of mine looked at the story and, you're not going to believe it, there is still some work to be done. The key item he noticed, at its something that flew way over my head, was dialogue variation. So far (according to my friend), its: "...." x person noted, "....", y person said <- where's the variation? It doesn't feel like full, fleshed out story now that I think about it. So here's what's going to happen: I am going to finish my current editing process with the plan of attack I

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Hello everyone! So, this is a first time call out for me, but I figured considering the story has so much attention and there are people that do want me to keep writing it despite my dissatisfaction with its quality, that asking if anyone would like to assist in a possible restructure of this story would not be a bad idea.

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